I really like this!
The video is good, lyrics are cool, I like the melody. I'd actually happily sit listening to that in my car with the roof down and not care what other people thought!
It really connects with you via the lyrics which are well sung. It just makes me feel good and uplifted! Really really honestly very well done! This sounds like music I'd prefer to hear on the radio these days!
That is, I love it right up till the rapping comes on, at which point I just want to hit the person singing(rapping) it in the face (unless they are coming for a remap, in which case, nice work!)
Obviously this is just my opinion and I'm an old fart these days at 32 years old
Maybe I'm not with the times, but that music would sit so well without the rapping bit for my personal tastes.
Since you have created this piece of music, and I don't usually get a chance to ask why on something I really like but feel is ruined by rapping... WHY is the rap bit in there?
What creative flow leads you to go "and now we need a rapping bit here" ?
Again, I'm old, I generally don't buy music, and if you people prefer the rapping bit in there then great
If you want to make a living you have to make what your market will buy, so if that is what it takes and you like it, do it!
I'd actually like to have a mix of that without the rapping, it's nice relaxing uplifting lyrics and music, so on that part (which it sounds like you are mainly responsible for), well done
If you ever do release it commercially, put a non-rapping mix on the CD so I can listen to that version please and I'll buy it
Dave
The video is good, lyrics are cool, I like the melody. I'd actually happily sit listening to that in my car with the roof down and not care what other people thought!
It really connects with you via the lyrics which are well sung. It just makes me feel good and uplifted! Really really honestly very well done! This sounds like music I'd prefer to hear on the radio these days!
That is, I love it right up till the rapping comes on, at which point I just want to hit the person singing(rapping) it in the face (unless they are coming for a remap, in which case, nice work!)
Obviously this is just my opinion and I'm an old fart these days at 32 years old

Maybe I'm not with the times, but that music would sit so well without the rapping bit for my personal tastes.
Since you have created this piece of music, and I don't usually get a chance to ask why on something I really like but feel is ruined by rapping... WHY is the rap bit in there?
What creative flow leads you to go "and now we need a rapping bit here" ?
Again, I'm old, I generally don't buy music, and if you people prefer the rapping bit in there then great

I'd actually like to have a mix of that without the rapping, it's nice relaxing uplifting lyrics and music, so on that part (which it sounds like you are mainly responsible for), well done

If you ever do release it commercially, put a non-rapping mix on the CD so I can listen to that version please and I'll buy it

Dave